Tuesday, August 08, 2006

she awoke

His hand creeped around, embracing closer and closer,

brawny stubs against delicate skin

a kiss at shoulders creek,

"I love you" he whispered

she awoke, confused

it was just the wind.

ps : written long long ago in 1964 ;p

16 comments:

Jeevan said...

sweet one:)

My days(Gops) said...

he he he
neenga apppavey porandhaacha? (birth)...gud gud....

Harsha said...

Can i ask who wrote it? ;)

The Smiling Girl said...

Same thing as Gops said..
u were born then, is it? ;)

ashok said...

cool poem...and ya, who wrote it?

Me said...

written long long ago in 1964 ;p

....innimel unga per visithra paati...:p

Inder said...

mischievous wind. hahaha :P

Ramya said...

if u wrote it, visit paati, if not who did?

Aravind said...

gud one, Ramya :D

Visit, nethu thaan ungaLa akka-nu sonnen, innikku paati aayiteengaLae ;)

visithra said...

Ahemm nahn than pa eludhenen - poem was written by me

1964 was a figure of speech - athukuleh paathi pethinu! Cheh ;p

visithra said...

Jeevan : thanks ;)


mydays : adapavameh cheh ipdhi sohlitingehle


harsha : i wrote it - 1964 was just a ruse ;p


sg : hehe u too? - i was just implying its old;p not that im old ;p


Ashok : ahha thanks ;) i did ;) the 1964 was a figure of speech


Me : paati nu kuptha naan thatanu kupdhuven! ;p


Inder : hehe yeah naughty fella ;)


ramya : great great now everyone has jumped the patti bandwagon ! Bah!

Me only wrote but 1964 chumma ;p


Aravind : aiii nee yehpo ehpo bully pahnalam nee oreh waiting! Me calling u thatha from now! ;p

My days(Gops) said...

sare maathi solluren...
porandhaacha neenga appavey?
he he he......

ps:- written long long ago n 1964?
1994'nu solli irrukalam'la?

Balaji S Rajan said...

Visit,

The poem is excellent. I pity you.. pavam... oru 1964 nnu pottutu pasanga kitta matikiteenga..

visithra said...

mydays : grrr iruhndalum ithu 3 much ;p

1994 not so fun ;p

balaji s : hehe thanks ;) but its all in the game - avangehlukum time pass vehnumleh ;p

SamY said...

and u r giving a recap b'cooooooooooz /:)

visithra said...

samy : ada chumma than - ithu enna diggings?