Friday, June 30, 2006

Rogue

She could see him from the corner of her eyes. With a twinkle in his eyes and a smile on his lips, he was as they say, checking her out. It was a day long function and only after having bumped into him a few times, did she notice, he was looking at her. Thus began the courting of eyes. He was always seated a distance from her but well in view. She on the other hand could always peek, unnoticed at the tall broad shouldered stranger.

Wherever they moved he would always been an arms throw away. She was rounding a corner when they bumped into each other. He unabashedly winked at her with a delighted smile plastered across his face. What a smile it was, masculine yet enriched with warmth. She would steal a glance whenever she sensed he wasn't looking and so far she hadn't been caught.

She frantically albeit discreetly searched for him in the crowd, when she realised he was missing. Minutes later she sensed someone watching her from her right, ah the rogue was standing right next to her!

The formalities had them moving about. She was seated across the hall and he was walking about staring straight at her. She observed with lowered eyes his brazen gazing. As soon as he looked away, she glanced up to look at him.

Ah the rogue had mastered the game of stolen glances, he turned and cheekily smiled, having finally caught her looking. Surprised she smiled back blushing at having been caught.

26 comments:

sreekrishnanv said...

short and sweet !..
..... reminds me of something i do ;)

Good one !!

geetha said...

Did you get caught?
Hmm, must master the game too ;)

Keropok said...

Vis, yaar antha rogue?

yvy said...

Hhmmmm...has someone been brushing up on her main mata skills? ;P

Usha said...

seems this ancient game still has its charm. anda naalilaye thiruuvallur "Yaan
Nokungal nilam nooki nokakal kannokki "appdeenu formula ellam potu solli koduthutu poirukare. Innikum it holds good polirukku, enna?

Filtered Sambhar said...

hey vish,

exams were fine da, now getting set to work! :((

Filtered by sambhar....

Jeevan said...

ennamo nadakeratha enakku pidikeratha, antha mathiri poguthu story. sweet post.

netajovi said...

post sounds interesting...:)....wat happen at the end...did they speak to each other..?

Prabu Karthik said...

visith
payyan yaara irundalum kavalai padaame amma kitte sollu:)

My days(Gops) said...

paarthaachi paarthaachi.... idhu maadhiri paarthaachi...
enna'nga latest'a? "alaipaiudhe" padatha paartheengala .."madhavan & shalini touch'la irruku?""
mmmm..nadakattum nadakattum......

cheers.......

My days(Gops) said...

btw, commented on all ur last 4 posts.........

sreekrishnanv said...

Brazeeeel .... gone ha ha ha !!!

kandykane said...

ha.. nice piece.. reminded me of my college days, and my first love ! stolen glances and gentle touch.. i miss all that.

Gina said...

During paintball session, I suddenly just look back at one gorgeous hunk who was trailing behind me, and both of our eyes met. He then smiled, and I smiled back at him.

BTW - Brazil sudah kalah lah.. sob sob.

Mythreyee said...

hehe.. i love this game! you simply cant help but blush when you're caught stealing a glance! :) feels gud!

Mythreyee said...

too bad abt brazil btw.. :( france was gud tho....

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Hahaha..Athaney payyan yaru ;)

Keropok said...

Vis... I feel your pain. Truth be told, BRazil could have played another 90 minutes and yet not scored.

Oh woe is me... Argentina is gone!!!

visithra said...

Sree : ehhehe its probably something everyone does - thanks ;)


Geetha : heehhe its fiction ;) though i am a master ;p


keropok : chumma story - fiction ;p reel vitha kudah realnu kekuringeh - ulagam kethu pochi - tsh tsh


Yvy : main mata skills always there but this one simply only


usha : it will probably hold good as long as humans have eyes ;) like i always say thiruvalluvar was a genius ;p


filter : hey good to know - aww hehe welcome to our world


jeevan : ehhehe no story ithu chumma - thanks


netajovi : what happened next ah? Donno will have to think up another story

Pk : ada engeh amma would be so happy if that was the story but u see its fiction ;p

visithra said...

Mydays : hehehhe pahkame oru youngster iruhka mudiyuhma? ;p

hehehe nah but athu one of my fav movies ;)

ps : i saw n replied to all ;)


Sree : whua not fair nah pavam :(


Kandykane : heheh yeah the first touch of romance ;) thanks


gina : ooohhhhh i can imagine the sizzle of the moment ;p hehehe

Yeah my sob story la - poor them poor me :( but i still love them


Mythreyee : ehhe we all love it ;) well u can master it n miss the blushing ;p

yeah paavam we didnt make it - hummm id say french defended very well


Ponnarasi : heheh chumma da reel ;p



Keropok : yeah me u we can all go whine for our teams sob!

Actually quite true - i tell u its jinxed me so hate them french - but french were really good defense wise

Aravind said...

andha rogue kitta "got caught looking"...
apram?? pesineegaLA, illaya ?? :P

Pramod said...

Poor guy... termed a Rogue for all this!! Not fair ;-)

BawangMerah said...

Then.. then wat happen la.

visithra said...

Aravind : lol yahruku terium ithu fiction - ;p


pramod : ah but rogue is an endearment ;p heheh anyway its fiction


bawangred : err err donno have to cook up story la - who knows

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